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WIZARD'S END_re-received
Date: 2018/10/09 21:06 By: johnVC Status: Admin  
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Hello Mr. Rorschalk,


I submitted this venture last winter and enjoyed the discussion of its merits and demerits on your blog. The main criticisms centered around the length (too long) and the formatting (irritating!). I've tried to address those problems in bringing the text down from 11000 words to 6900, and fixing the formatting issues that you identified.


I hope you'll like the [revision] attached.


johnVC

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Re:WIZARD'S END_re-received
Date: 2018/10/10 13:20 By: bulldust Status: Admin  
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Do we do resubmittals?

Usually, editors request rewrites. Not my call, but definitely odd.

Moo!

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Re:WIZARD'S END_re-received
Date: 2018/10/10 13:46 By: tqr Status: Admin  
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It will have to rise up off the Floor again before it's relitigated in the Terminal. The thorough editing that leads to an approximately 33 percent word count chop warrants another look see. So, wielding the big gavel like Thor's hammer or John the drunk Boehner's swizel stick,
"I'll allow it," I say unto thee.

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