Thanks for submitting to TQR. You're a mench. Sorry to say the monkey did not like your cap, brother. Might have had to do with those parenthesis in that quote in the first couple few pages. Parenthesis can't be in dialogue, cousin. Talking must be natural and nasty. Okay, not nasty,but talking comes out in rhythm, you can't go sublevel with parenthesis, Max Smart. Keep in mind, your cap might be brilliant, it's just that we didn't examine it because of those parenthesis. So, yo've a real good chance of getting in somewhere else, because most other ezines will take practically anything. And try and listen to more Zeke, for christ's sake.